Orinoko
: Honestly if i was the dad i would disown the brothers, cause they had one fucking job and that is to keep FL safe, so if the two of them together can't protect one person, how can someone trust them to protect the entire territory,( and the dad is still young he can pop out another child if he needs to )if i was him i would think that they left her alone on purpose so that she can get hurt, esspecially cause they had a fight because of her, there is no way i woulnd't be suspicious that they really did leave her alone on purpose, esspecially since they know that the emperror, the temple and many other nobles that don't like her would use this opportunity to kidnap or kill her cause it's easy to make it look like an accident
One other thing that bothers me in this story is the possible ML so from here on out there are SPOILERS for those that want to skip this part:
So from what i read the ML is the Tower Master, and im kinda not happy about it, i mean it was kinda predictable that he is the end game cause it's the typical plot of: enemies to lovers, ML having a condition that only FL can cure, FL and ML getting closer cause they are teaching eachother something and so on and so on, and that's ok we have seen this done a thousand times but one thing that bothers me is the ML age, like he is over 100 Y/O and here we are watching his romance with a 16y/o, idk it feels kinda pedo, the dude could be her great grandpa, yea i know there are probably stories where the ML or FL is 5000 y/o, but in those stories the age is just way to redicioulus to be taken seriously, but here these are actuall ages that people can achive, i know that this is a fictional story but irl if a story came out about a 100 y/o man dating a 16y/o girl the internet would go wild, and one thing that would be funny is, when his curse is lifted his body would just starts aging so that it can match his actuall age, it would be interesting to see the FL's reaction to that, maybe they would search for the person who cursed him so that they could do it again well anyway thank for reading my little rant and byee ヾ(☆▽☆)
monster under the bed
: Ok. I decided. I like the a silent one. He has the best chemistry with Sami.
Feeds
One other thing that bothers me in this story is the possible ML so from here on out there are SPOILERS for those that want to skip this part:
So from what i read the ML is the Tower Master, and im kinda not happy about it, i mean it was kinda predictable that he is the end game cause it's the typical plot of: enemies to lovers, ML having a condition that only FL can cure, FL and ML getting closer cause they are teaching eachother something and so on and so on, and that's ok we have seen this done a thousand times but one thing that bothers me is the ML age, like he is over 100 Y/O and here we are watching his romance with a 16y/o, idk it feels kinda pedo, the dude could be her great grandpa, yea i know there are probably stories where the ML or FL is 5000 y/o, but in those stories the age is just way to redicioulus to be taken seriously, but here these are actuall ages that people can achive, i know that this is a fictional story but irl if a story came out about a 100 y/o man dating a 16y/o girl the internet would go wild, and one thing that would be funny is, when his curse is lifted his body would just starts aging so that it can match his actuall age, it would be interesting to see the FL's reaction to that, maybe they would search for the person who cursed him so that they could do it again well anyway thank for reading my little rant and byee ヾ(☆▽☆)